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Walks He , deliberately
into the meandering corridors of her mind.
Slowly and watchfully marking His wants
Here be a little corner,
there another terrace,
she opens like a flower,
He sups
delicately,
then ravenously,

she glows as he does,
her offering
a frenzy
that creates more,
His feeding
a storm that ignites her
very soul

drawn again
and anon
thence to re-surrect,

she will fill His cup
again and again,
that dark liquid ,
that light in her eyes.

Shimmering , coalescing
brimming again
He Takes
fleshes His desires
evermore

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LeBrozLeBrozover 16 years ago
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 38,500 poems.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Beautiful

Just lovely. Really vivid images.

jthserrajthserraabout 20 years ago
Oh, very nice...

I love the off-beat phrasing here, a wonderful disjunction that finally coalesces in the final stanza. Very nice...

jim : )

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