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Click herePassing through the iris,
to see what is not seen,
calming the mind
in pungent moorings.
Two converge into focus and
witness a single thought
in echos of bedrock.
Morning doves coo
breaking stream
for a tiger pausing
by the rivers of blue.
A faint breeze
murmurs a gusty grin.
I loved word descriptions like pungent moorings. This well crafted verse left me marveling at it's simple beauty. Lovely Write!
The tiger and river pass through the iris and converge into a gutsy grin? Very nice.
The tiger and river pass through the iris and converge into a gutsy grin? Very nice.
supplies the thought,
and perfect imaginary-
to master to the letter,
sensual..
a pale blue orb
in drifts,
and settles peacefully
to a *grin*.
luv2theblu-
sGp
Love the imagery and, especially the line, "witness a single thought." Very nice.