eyes bronzed by the sea

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bluerains
bluerains
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You are the deepest of my ocean.
The eternity of dreams within desire.

Descended from seashells washed upon
distant shores of passion.
You ever dance upon my hallowed ground.

As a sailor drunk with Neptune's potions.
Wafted helpless upon his tides.

Dawn the coral stairway to your essence
Braving danger of your deep.
I watch you ever sail the wavelets of
my soul.

Beholding eyes of the sea
I stand humbled by a dream:

Your desire ever calling me to
your world of skies in Oceania
Water mirrors water.
Soul reflecting soul.

As the ghost of your reflected destiny
I remain therefore forever.
The lamp of a dreamer without
the eye to see.
However am I loved...

bluerains
bluerains
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duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
sensual

Your presence sails the watery depths of my very being ~ I am adrift waiting to be rescued.

TathagataTathagataabout 20 years ago
This reminds

me of a song called " Endless Sleep" for some reason.

I love this...

great imagery..and I like the last two lines only because it seems to bring it all back to the dreamlike hopelessness of it all.

( maria you can spank me later)

Thank you for this

very well done

Maria2394Maria2394about 20 years ago
good imagery

but the last line hurt your position, drop it, have faith in your ability without the ellipses, ok? :rose:

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