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ZekeNoScooter_8, vampfreak20 and 791 other people favorited this story!
I like the cadence, or flow of your writing. It's smooth as it builds. It's like it reads itself to you. And so hot. Nice, thank you.
The strength of this story is not character development (no room for that in a short story) or a novel excuse to introduce the incest (which is pretty standard) but is the way you play with words and sentences to create some of the best writing I've ever read on this site. One small comment would be that this somewhat breaks down during sex scenes, with the incomplete and single-word sentences becoming a little bit tiring to read.more...
Wonderful story! So sweet, so sensual, so real, so much like many of us have lived - regardless of what the future brought. Please continue the saga...........
U are talented, plz write a piss fetish sister story like 'How is it with lindy', it is the best fetish story i ever read.. Only you can beat this story...
Yaaaas! Lovein it!!😘😘😘
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