Fate

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nz_marie
nz_marie
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Lady Fate smiles at you thru clenched teeth

Her cruel sense of humor disguised behind pretty blue eyes

Hands hidden behind her back concealing what she holds

Could be success in one hand

Failure in the other

Or perhaps Love in the right

Rejection and heartbreak in the left

One never knows which hand she will touch you with

And sometimes she wantonly plays tricks on you

Behind her malicious grin she holds fire in one outstretched palm

And grasps a cloaked dagger in the other

So you are fucked no matter what you do

nz_marie
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5 Comments
LeBrozLeBrozalmost 17 years ago
~~

Here's a case where a better writer can pull off a well done job with caps on each line start and no punctuation.

darkerdreamerdarkerdreameralmost 17 years ago
Great piece

with great style. The last line was a fucking grand slam. The only thing that stuck out to me like a sore thumb was "thru", no idea why, I use it all the time. -2d

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
I once knew the lady fate ...

masquerading as a woman of the world.

As the Beatles so succinctly put it:

"I once had a girl,

Or should I say

She once had me."

Regards, Jack

unapologeticunapologeticalmost 17 years ago
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unapologeticunapologeticalmost 17 years ago
Bitter but...

This piece is bitter, but it somehow still manages to make me smile.

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