- Non-Erotic Poetry
- from my pillow
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three down feathers escape
amid the tussel
they hover
just above our faces
you juggle them with your breath
weightless
I too ride the updraft
of your whim
- COMMENTS
LeBrozabout 16 years agoThis poem was selected from Lit's archive of over 39,500 poems for inclusion in today's Archival Review.<br>
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Bill Dadaover 18 years agoTo the best writing doesn't tell about an experience, but is the experience. Your writing is some of the best I have ever read.
~hellbaby~almost 19 years agoI love what you did with the feather, I've been trying to get a wisp of hair to do something like that but still cannot get the words to float right.
dcpoet44almost 19 years agoand i like the correlation of the down and up of the piece.
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoPlayful and sexy. I like the lack of punctuation-- it adds to the airy feel.
Fly
