fruit of his vine

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bluerains
bluerains
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temple cock
his secret space
sacrificed loin lullabies
with moon laces tinting
musky skin
a ripened vintage
that pierced cored
burgundy veins
of patterned age
anoint me once more
frayed pilgrim

bluerains
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WickedEveWickedEveabout 19 years ago
temple cock

cock=temple. That's been done before--a lot. This poem had the potential to suck, but hey blue, it didn't! :) No way. Lots of unique phrases, like loin lullabies, made this a good and interesting read.

Bill DadaBill Dadaabout 19 years ago
Give Me That Ol' Time Religion

I agree with Syn, this good. I plan to read more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Wow, blue!

This is good.

Syn

sandspikesandspikeabout 19 years ago
love the one you know

I got the feeling you drink from this vine often. Love

and sex thats how I read it. Smooth.

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