His Shadow Speaks

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Angeline
Angeline
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I was his shadow once.
Perhaps you saw me,
hooked close by his heels,
flaring up ten times his size.

Defined in silhouette
I was more sharp, defiant,
battle-ready than any human boy.

Ere beside him was I poised
against broad pirate planks.
I joined him move for move.

Avast Ye Hook! Ye Snee!
Fear him and thus fear me!

We danced between the sun and sea,
no two more matched in bravery.
Until the drooping sun claimed light,
I was each day his nature’s knight.

When nighttime fell, we hid
beneath a tree and rocked
in our sage symmetry
by candlelight and fire’s flare,
with unlit pipe, unruly hair,
he spoke and lost boys listened.

He listened when I spoke to him,
we gloated, strategized
until he slept, and I
was naught.

Twas his thought~
travel back.
For he is human born,
enough of real boy left in him
to feel the lure of stories told
while floating by a window,
bold and hovering in bliss.

Twas his thought~
travel back.
For he is human born,
and there forgot imagination’s strife,
and heavy-lidded drank up life,
dreaming to the sweetest song
the world can know~

the voice of Mother
reading fairy tales.

Was it humanity
caused our undoing?

We came too close,
and from him I was shorn.
Now he is less than he could be,
less fierce by half,
while I await him here
in limp gray half-life,
faded and unclear.

Angeline
Angeline
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4 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I can

read your poetry all day long :)

tungtied2utungtied2uover 19 years ago
Lit's own tinkerbell

once again sprinkles her magic stardust, enchanting us all. I want to stay forever in this land. Thank you. :)

*thermometer off

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
Only you

would write from Peter Pan's shadow's point of view.

This goes in the fairy tale book

: )

Thank you

jd4georgejd4georgeover 19 years ago
Which voice do I listen to?

Which voice do I hear? Which voice is yours, and which is simply reverie? Do I listen to the metered, rhyming one hidden in the poem, or the one seeking courage at the end?

Then, there's the other voices. Reading this, I don't know who to listen to.

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