I Had a Dream

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Thought comes slowly,
dragging day behind
whilst I lie sluggish,
unwilling to wake,
unable to sleep,
I lost a dream,
upset, upset,
like a crate of milk.

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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 14 years ago
I do enjoy.....

....the simplicity of you work. You are able to create much with few words, not just in this poem but much of your work.

Tess.

P.S - I came upon your work through an unusual route - as you know. :-) I'm very glad I did.

buttersbuttersover 14 years ago
not a fan of so much punctuation in a poem but ...

here it adds to the broken, disjointed sense of a mind where tattered dream-remnants are not yet blown away but the firm ground of conscious thought is not yet underfoot.

it also speaks metaphorically to me, of a sadness, like the remembering a lost relationship.

EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyover 14 years ago
Like it

I especially like the line 'dragging day behind'