I Want... YOU

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I love you...
Please be with me
I've never felt this way
about anyone before

I want to learn
new things with you
Want to love you
forever an always

I want to feel you
from the inside out
Want to please you
in any way I can

I want to teach you
what I can do with my mouth
Want you to teach me
everything you know in bed

I want to cuddle
and take care of you
Want us to be
friends and wild lovers

I want to be with you
and commit my life to yours
Want us to be happy
and together have a family

I love you...
Please be with me
I've never felt this way
about anyone before

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MsVanilla69MsVanilla69about 2 months ago

Very nicely thought out and written

Mr_Spicy_xoMr_Spicy_xoover 2 years ago

I don't like it , I love it

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
#2 NEEDS FOR LOVE

over rules the heart. TK U MLJ LV NV

The_Sex_BoothThe_Sex_Boothover 12 years ago
I want YOU

I've heard better advertisements for the US Army, I must admit.

I want to teach you

what I can do with my mouth

Want you to teach me

everything you know in bed

These are, literally, absolutely, the best lines of poetry ever written. Without doubt. I'm going to burn 100 copies of The Waste Land in your honour, and re-write it under the title of The Taste Land. These lines will be the epigraph. Here is a sample:

APRIL is the cruellest month, breeding

me with your mum.

I hope, one day, we'll be as good as you.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
GO DO GO DO GO DO

then wish for true. TK U MLJ LV NV

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