In My Dreams

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~hellbaby~
~hellbaby~
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I wanted to thank him
but he left as I was waking up
Now I guess he'll never know

I saw the sun peeking through the drapes
Drapes of velvet, hued the color of coffee's cream
and as I saw the sun, he floated off

His parting was so subtle
more a thought than an action
a mere whisper on the sigh of a dream

The gift he offered created the dream
A dream set free by passionate words
They built the chariot on which he rode

Brilliant and strong he came to my side
every desire within me he sparked to a flame
he gave me back every dream I lost

He'll never know how grateful I am
His words induced feelings that awakened my soul
And filled my night with reasons to dream

and though the day is just beginning
I await its surrender to the dark denim sky
where twinkles of luck dance with the moon
Where my lover will meet me
in my dreams

~hellbaby~
~hellbaby~
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sacksackover 18 years ago
nice imagery.....

One of your more gentle utterances....made my day!

impressiveimpressiveover 18 years ago
Lovely

Ethereal and poignant. Well done. ~Imp

Honey123Honey123over 18 years ago
Very tender

and romantic. I truly enjoyed your words...

~Honey

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
Sweet and...

...and bittersweet at the same time. The language seemded to flow from one stunning image to another.

TY, BD

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Nice`

Love your Dream. A whispy lil write, that flows so smooth. Full of emotion. Just loved this lil ride. Sweet and dreamy. A gurls gotta have dreams right. Keep on dreamin, thats how ya make'm true ...

More please~!!

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