tagNon-Erotic PoetryIt didn't happen

It didn't happen

byScotsman69©

It didn't happen

We never shared
Shostakovich and Beethoven,
never melted together before
Monet or Degas.
It didn't happen.

We never explored
islands and architecture,
nor nourished our children together.
We weren't lifemates.
It didn't happen.

Never wrote and edited
in excitement, for each other.
It was all just
the most heartbreaking illusion.
So it can't have happened,
can it?

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by CocoDuVoir06/09/15

The Feels

I must disagree with some of the other comments here, for me, poetry is about feeling. It is not a science and so technical accuracy is second place to the emotion, sentiment and sense of nostalgia a poemmore...

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