- Non-Erotic Poetry
- It started in June
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Click hereSpring madness usually means
women at white sales
not men in white coats.
"We thought it was just a bad trip"
A two-week walkabout in Seattle
sleeping on a courtyard couch
and conversations with Lucifer is
no one's idea of a vacation.
When the Haldol kicked in
she said it had been a fantastic experience
a revelation she needed to understand.
For a while, we could even joke about it.
How there must be something in the water at MIT.
A cartoon devil on one shoulder,
angel on the other.
That was 14 Junes ago this year.
Crazy has become a lot less funny since then.
- COMMENTS
Desejoalmost 11 years agoAuthor1201 - that's a good suggestion. I may change it. Greenmountaineer - there is no way I could lose that last line - integral to the entire sad experience.
Desejoalmost 11 years agoAuthorThis may be an unorthodox response, but this poem is not meant to be read aloud. In fact, I should not have even left the ratings on - and I probably will voting off it. Enjambment and musicality are issues I probably do need to work on, and thank you for pointing that out. But in this poem, the disjointedness and monotone correspond to what I wanted.
GuiltyPleasurealmost 11 years ago....has been said by others for me, too late to the table but I can tell you I gave it 5.
