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Jack be nimble
Jack be quick
Jack jump over the candlestick
Original Mother Goose Song above
My rewrite of the above below
Jack, let me put this to you simple
Jack, I want you out quick
'Cause Jack, this lady don't waste her time
Playing around with a man whose only got a 2 inch candlestick
2009 Ramona Thompson
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