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Click hereDark green foliage
slow swaying windswept
arc, cleaning dreary
morning mist.
Tui call echoes
through bush filled valleys
souvenirs beneath
decayed brown mould.
Ground ferns spawning
unfurling naïve
newborns, stretching
to dark green leaves.
*kakariki is the Maori word for green.
Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poems thread on the Literotica Poetry Forum:
http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=22735812#post22735812
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such an exotic word compared to the english version, the poem frames it well.
Last stanza was gorgeous life springing
I will be watching your poems as they come,
~anna
~Dark green foliage
slow swaying windswept
arc, cleaning dreary
morning mist.~
What a great image.
Very nice poem
Thank you