Kakariki Kinship

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Dark green foliage
slow swaying windswept
arc, cleaning dreary
morning mist.

Tui call echoes
through bush filled valleys
souvenirs beneath
decayed brown mould.

Ground ferns spawning
unfurling naïve
newborns, stretching
to dark green leaves.


*kakariki is the Maori word for green.

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RybkaRybkaalmost 17 years ago
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Your poem has been mentioned in the New Poems thread on the Literotica Poetry Forum:

http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=22735812#post22735812

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annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
language

such an exotic word compared to the english version, the poem frames it well.

Last stanza was gorgeous life springing

I will be watching your poems as they come,

~anna

TathagataTathagataover 19 years ago
This

~Dark green foliage

slow swaying windswept

arc, cleaning dreary

morning mist.~

What a great image.

Very nice poem

Thank you

flyguy69flyguy69over 19 years ago
Beautiful

A vibrant, verdant poem of nature's web. Well done, wild one!

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