Learning How to Lose

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He said "Living is learning how to lose".
I think that he meant it too.
But also I think really
He hoped that he was wrong.

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Oldbear63Oldbear63over 9 years ago
But

Meaning it or not, and what he hoped for aside, he was right, just not completely right. Excellent Clearday, You pack a lot of feeling in 4 lines.

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 9 years ago
U know Clearday :

Leo Messi is gonna appreciate your words esp. after losin' the hard-fought Final !!?? 5-ed

CleardaynowCleardaynowover 9 years agoAuthor
Thank you 1201

You are right. I fooled myself that the repitition gave emphasis - wrong. However I think 'I could see clearly' is too definite.

I think I prefer

He said "Living is learning how to lose".

I think that he meant it too.

But I suspect really

He hoped that he was wrong.

tazz317tazz317over 9 years ago
DONT FORGET

bad habits are hard to Brake, TK U MLJ LV NV

twelveoonetwelveooneover 9 years ago
3rd line

drags, needs more punch. 2 thinks. try sense change

I could see clearly

as a suggestion

5ed