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- Limbo of the Beasts
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skeleton deer,
still rehearsing
a dance
completed long ago.
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buried_aliveover 10 years agoamazing!
This poem is so visual. I can't suggest any improvements . I only wanted to say I love it and job well done. The first poem on my favorites list! !!!!!!5!!!!!!!!
LesseloovesPeterover 10 years agoWisps on the wind of life. Is time now, is all time at once, is time an illusion? Do we exist in parallel universes where moments cross but never touch?
