Looper

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HarryHill
HarryHill
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Looper
Round and round
giving and taking
Life granted by death
Paradox
Erased with a bullet
The future never happens
past yet to be lived
When the end
finds the beginning
is life over
or just starting?

HarryHill
HarryHill
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buttersbuttersalmost 10 years ago
just found this

yes, the paradox...

i really like 'erased with a bullet' and how you close the loop on this one

Ashesh9Ashesh9over 11 years ago
Future follows the Past which follows the Future

In a never-ending vicious circle !! It's all illusion .......maya !!

HarryHillHarryHillover 11 years agoAuthor
Wrote this after seeing the movie

if you are a sci-fi fan you'll love it

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
#2 A PARADOX OF A PARALLEL UNIVERSE

and the arguments continue in coffee houses and academia. TK U MLJ LV NV

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
NO MATTER THE PRESENT

the FUTURE will still occur....only not what someone's premonition of/for. TK U MLJ LV NV