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Click hereEyes hollowed
Unshed tears in ice blue windows
Shuttered and shaded
Hiding nothing
Revealing nothing
Knowing nothing
Lost
Scattering the ashes
Across the frozen prairie
Her heart shattered
Never seeing
Never knowing
Never having
Lost
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2 Comments
RhymeFairyover 18 years agoCreative and sad ~
I love the simplicity here.
Very few words, and so moving.
Perfect ~!!
More Plez ~
Good to see you back at Lit. Lindiana ~
LeBrozover 18 years ago~~
Stark, severe, austere ~
giving the last word of each strophe
powerful impact.
*****
Just a thought that perhaps
"Scattering ashes"
sounds better without "the"
picky - picky - picky........
