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Click hereLost and found
Lost in memories
Your touch
on my face
my neck
my breasts
my back
my ass
Cupping me in your hands
And cradling that swell you love
Pulling me to you
Holding me
Desiring me
Possessing me
But I could never hold you for long
I can still feel you
Inside me
The heat
The passion
The fire deep in me
That only you ignite
only you quench
lost in the memories of your mouth
on my mouth
on my breast
on the very core of my womanhood
touching
tasting
feasting
searing me
branding me
here
here
and
here
But you are not here
you are lost
perhaps now I can be found
I WOULD HAVE LIKED IT EVEN MORE IF SOME OF THE ME AND AND S WERE LEFT OUT JUST LET IT FLOW. GOOD JOB.
I really enjoyed this dear. It is simply wonderful. I believe you caught the moment you wanted to express well. Congrats. I liked the way you structured the poem. It gave it a bit more attitude I think. I really like the way that you ended it as well. I hope you find what you're looking for. I'm in your corner for sure.
Take care,
Ashley
Quote:
Your touch
on my face
my neck
my breasts
my back
my ass
I like this, but I probably would've eliminated some words like the, my and me.
Your touch on my face,
neck, back, breasts
and ass
Quote:
Holding me
Desiring me
Possessing me
Holding, desiring
and possessing me
Just a little too much repetition for me. But a pleasure to read. Thank you.