Lust and Indifference

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firstkiss
firstkiss
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we're connected mostly by lust and indifference
today I'll take you to my bed,
tomorrow you won't call
I go down on you but forget your birthday
you give me orgasms but never flowers
and Christmas went by unremarked again this year

but what is December twenty-fifth
compared to your mouth?
your groans are worth more than telephone calls
and what do blooms matter when you reach for me?
we are mouth-to-mouth, skin-to-skin
the rise and fall of breath and body
and nothing else

firstkiss
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Mo_B_DickMo_B_Dickover 11 years ago
Flowers and orgasms, and a truth.

Apathy Fucking. I dare someone to brainstorm that one.

TzaraTzaraalmost 12 years ago
Interesting and different take

on the erotic poem, particularly the narrator's attitude or thought about the relationship. Much better than the usual frantic, dripping body parts we usually get here.

tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
EXCEPT FOR DEEP CARING

with that, what else is there. TK U MLJ LV NV