- Erotic Poetry
- Maya Dark Zero Suit
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Click hereMaya’s suit fits her like second skin;
Black cloth with a dark spell woven in;
But magic is unholy, heresy a sin;
Maya is Eve and inquisition all in one;
Arrest and trial and justice done;
Maya’s suit will be your fate;
Maya’s suit is Eden’s gate;
Shutting you out while she stays within.
Maya’s suit plots, Maya’s suit schemes;
A soft trap made of folds and seams
Which preys and plays in the way of all flesh;
Making design and desire mesh;
Clothing all love’s varied themes;
Turning nature’s earth from clay to tailored dreams.
- COMMENTS
twelveooneabout 11 years agosomewhere between a sonnet and an incantation
you have to do some serious thinking here. i.e why
the way of all flesh;
do you have a reason?
Which preys and plays in the ways of all flesh; of flesh? of the flesh,
true, way of the flesh is a referent
consider dropping some of the ...ings
very good instincts here
5ed
HarryHillabout 11 years agowas better than this ... but again the content continues to engage. Leave the suit; bring the Canoli.
SweetOblivionabout 11 years agoNeeds some work on the form and perhaps there are too many suits in the first stanza, but I liked your ambition.
