Meaningless clashes !

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Part 2 of the 4 part series

Updated 08/04/2023
Created 07/22/2013
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Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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We are all the descendants of a Point
An infinitely powerful Bindu of Shakti
Called by Learned Doctorates a Singularity
& our sole remainin' Descendant
Shall be a Powerful Black Hole
From a Point we are born
To a Hole we shall go
Stop fightin' : just lay back
& enjoy the Energy Flow !!!
Why to clash , why our Ego ?
He's Brown , she's Black
-- no more , no more ......
She's Merckel , he's Putin
I am Ash9 , he's a cretin
This is Great Literature, that's trash
Give up meaningless discrimination
Each other please do not bash !
From a Point we take birth
To a Hole we shall flow ----
Gender , Race , Intelligence stratification
Come let us Let Go ----------

Ashesh9
Ashesh9
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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years agoAuthor
1201 , from a point U , i et al have come

to a Black [W]hole all will go ----

so to what end "well meanin' Discrimination" , Friend ?

this Tower of Babel , mucho meanin'less ado ????!!!!!!

----A9

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
really?

I am Ash9 , he's a cretin

This is Great Literature, that's trash

Give up meaningless discrimination

Each other please do not bash !

1 a contradiction here: cretin/do not bash

2 there is a difference between discrimination and well discriminating, the sliddin slope of language

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Ashesh9Ashesh9over 10 years agoAuthor
The second last line should have been

Gender , Race , Income stratification .

DesejoDesejoover 10 years ago

Deserves a good tune to go along with it :)