Memory Like Instinct

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Angeline
Angeline
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Crows,

not Heckel or Jekyll
personified cartoon reductions
perched elbow wing leaning
on a cane, bird mocking
dissuaders of flight,

but living predatory instinct
swoops to breach calm skies
or poises in the breezy distance,
still save the hooded oval
of inhuman eyes

that capture.

My imagination is imperfect
as a fallen feather, fleeting
as the shadow on a cloud.

If they spoke to me I only
heard a shiny creak of memory,
brittle, departed once upon
a naked tree.

Angeline
Angeline
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dcpoet44dcpoet44over 18 years ago
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all else has been said.....just score

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nice

You've painted some excellent images here. Well done!

Sabina_TolchovskySabina_Tolchovskyover 18 years ago
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very nice imagery...Sabina

darkmaasdarkmaasover 18 years ago
One has to love..

... a poem bristling with black birds.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnover 18 years ago
lovely words

Really nice images, the last stanza was grand! But this is the best :

My imagination is imperfect

as a fallen feather, fleeting

as the shadow on a cloud.

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