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Click hereMy mind a tumult of jumbled thoughts
My heart tormented by longing
My soul hollow without you
My days are passed with thoughts
Of the memories and desires evoked
A raging inferno waiting to be quenched
This unease of my very being
My desire to be held
But ever and only by one
How much longer I don't know
But for you my life I'll wait
Forever apart we shall not be
Though now my nights are hard to bear
I have this assurance of you
That the hollowness will be filled by you
Your best poem, but the last two lines are weak.
A five, to reward improvement.