New Ways, finally?

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Listening and watching
does one learn
more sleeping
and dreaming may
lend better visions.

I love the living
dreams that happen
in pink glows,
lit by saffire
brimstone Taken
riven to the core
Pure heat and then
that molten liquid cream
risen to the Top.

Come from behind
leave a mark
Bindings ropes welts
Raisers are you
Razors maybe

slow slips of sliding sharp edges
Step off , if
you can float slowly
in lazy circles
wafted by breeze
caresses and warm
wishes.
Now and
sometimes
He looks and plucks
one at a
time and feeds.
Feeds again
Sates His self.

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tungtied2utungtied2ualmost 20 years ago
Like the imagery

and the movenment. If that's the point great stuff. But I need some help understanding what you're saying- call me thick, or dense. (just don't call me late for dinner) :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
I......

...always enjoy watching Razz play with his words and this is no exception. Some great alliteration and well chosen lines.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Wonderful

images. This is really good work.

WickedEveWickedEvealmost 20 years ago
Lots to enjoy here,

especially:

I love the living

dreams that happen

in pink glows,

lit by saffire

brimstone Taken

riven to the core

tarablackwood22tarablackwood22almost 20 years ago
You're...

...on here, capture things perfectly in your unique way. Enjoyed this, read it more than once.

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