- Erotic Poetry
- no she said
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kiss me I said
no she said
kiss me I said
no she said
I turned to leave
kiss me she said
I did
hands on her face
lips finding pressing hers
my hands wandered
wandered down
to
her full firm breasts
her warm round heaving breasts
no she said
yes I said
and pressed my lips more firmly to hers
pressed my hands more firmly
where they so well fit
then let my hands wander down
to her waist
and wander up again
up under her blouse
touching caressing pressing
skin on skin my hands on
her full warm breasts
fingertip finding and outlining
first one nipple
and then the other
her hands had
also wandered
one down my back
into my pants
she grabbed hold of my ass cheek
one hand down my front
into my pants
doing wonderful things
yes I said
oh yes she said
- COMMENTS
Ashesh9over 11 years ago----- we say ! Initial reluctance converted to full-fledged arousal as manly enthusiasm overcomes maidenly resistance !!
CliteraryLickitover 11 years agoNice idea, and reasonably erotic poem. Thanks !
but your choice of imagery and your rhythm needs some improvement especially in the last verse.
'She grabbed hold of my ass cheek' is a terribly clumsy line,
and 'into my pants' twice is a bit unimaginative.
and 'doing wonderful things doesn't scan quite right or sound right
A better last verse, I humbly suggest, would have been something like -
'Her hands had also
wandered,
one gently traced
down my spine
squeezed under
the elastic line,
and cupped a buttock,
where it pawsed.
The other led a soft
frontal assault
under and down
where her feather tips,
like little ants,
crept slowly
into my pants.
"Ohhhh....No, No", I smiled.
"Oh yes, yes",
she whispered.
tazz317over 11 years agoand her actions outweighed the words. TK U MLJ LV MV
