Ode to Ether

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MisterSade

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She once lived here.
But her presence often confused him
Still confused, hoping I won't be used.
This will fade as We find the beauty in them all.

My words flow quickly now.
Such emotion
Empathy within love within lust.
I smile to you like a pup.

You smile to me
Like 100 BILLION lumens
and I melt into stars
Fused with butterflies.

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MisterSade

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Butterflies512 over 11 years ago

You sound like either someone I know or someone I should know...

Cinner over 11 years ago

The rhyme

My ONLY critiques of this poem is that I wouldn't have used the word "confused" twice in two lines, and rhymed "confused" with "used" in line three. Beyond that, this is at your usual standard of elegance and sophistication. I'm becoming a genuine fan of your work!