- Erotic Poetry
- Odette from Odessa
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Click hereIn that room there was a only a chair and a bed
And next door Led Zeppelin played loudly
And he'd texted her before he came around
Whilst her baby cried, milk dripped
From her breasts and down her belly
And still that bare-back ride was only one hundred and twenty.
- COMMENTS
twelveooneover 13 years agoit was, I am. It is not erotic, but 100, very good. My faith in you is being rewarded.
GuiltyPleasureover 13 years ago.......expecting something very different from the title but I do like this and agree with PoetGuy, it is quite erotic in an obtuse way.
Tess
PoetGuyover 13 years agoHe is not sure he personally finds it erotic, meaning that it is not in the least arousing to him, but the otherwise grim tale is made memorable to him by the semi-rhyme of some of the lines ("loudly," "belly,", "twenty") and the approximation of ballad meter, particularly in the first half.
