tagNon-Erotic PoetryOffhand, a Red Car

Offhand, a Red Car


                I mean
even a Ferrari
doesn't always start
because maybe a drained battery,
injectors clogged with sludge,
or some thin important wire that was cut

      by accident
and left quivering
on the cool manifold.

But even dead, this car is fast

            & if I must be a broken toy,
much better were I sleek and red.

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