Oh Vienna

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bluerains
bluerains
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Recite words of love
in this drowning pool
of another wounded relationship.

I will be your sacrificial lamb,
hungry for tidbits of cracked
connections,
spliced from Bohemian failure...

I’ll just erase meaningless phases
of euphuistic jive
as you see daylight
after the curtain is drawn.

bluerains
bluerains
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f-cynyrf-cynyrover 18 years ago
nice use

of cliche's. you got your point across.

LuciousBi-Writes4ULuciousBi-Writes4Uover 18 years ago
good...

first of yours that i have read,

very intersting and poignant.

lovely...

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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There you go again, making me work, "euphuistic jive" indeed! Finally found euphuism in the dictionary (and the Google search helped too). Especially liked those last two lines.

lobomaolobomaoover 18 years ago
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oh to be there again

eons Egon ago

seeing sights of Scheile

and taking in new tastes

whistful fistfuls of experience

then on to Prague to

drink in a steaming Mucha

ah me oh my

the places you'll go...

Bill DadaBill Dadaover 18 years ago
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I like 'euphuistic jive.'

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