- Erotic Poetry
- Pavlovian Response
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Click herein the diaper aisle I sight that pattern
brown eyes, heavy brow, broad smile—
I drench where I’m empty;
mentally dropping to my knees
my tongue explores his erection.
- COMMENTS
Maria2394about 13 years agoto come across a piece of work that is so effective in so few words. well done. :)
~ maria
Angelineabout 13 years agoof these little poems and submit them somewhere. I bet you get published, really. This is fascinating the way the image (of diapers of all things) creates this break where we go from a supermarket aisle to the poet's inner thoughts which are so not mundane! Just wonderful!
Esperanza_Hidalgoabout 13 years agotitle. The first two lines set the stage, then it stops as she soaks! It is nailed??? home with that yucky BJ. It is all happening in fantasy, and many can relate to a similar desire by some beauty at a supermarket. I can't find anything I'd change.
UnderYourSpellabout 13 years agoohhhhhhhh dirty girl! supermarket shopping will never be the same again!
