To be continued.....
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Icookedugood, Raider1976 and 39 other people favorited this story!
I disagree. Jamaica is GMT-5, same as Florida. You DON'T gain, or lose, an hour flying to Jamaica. Formerly and formally. Sound similar. Mean nothing similar. Computers with internet connections are wonderful research tools for writers. How much effort does it take?more...
This is a good story. Your character development was right on. The sex scene was rushed. It needed to fleshed out more. With the wife off of birth control the possibility of pregnancy is there which would spice up the story.more...
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