- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Picturesque
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This little stream
Running through the jungle
Is so amazing.
If you are wondering
Why that is,
It is because-
A writer leaves
A crystal like view
That’s so clear,
But so contrasting
In the midst of mainstream.
- COMMENTS
twelveoonealmost 20 years agowith all the comments below
'cause I'm an agreeable guy (not bloody likely!)
Well we are kind of getting away from the "P" word,
But this is damn fine job
normal jeanalmost 20 years agomyself sitting here thinking of so many things this poem could be a metaphor for ;)
I like the way your poetry makes me rethink the way poetry is supposed to be read or understood, almost like reading it but interpreting it backwards..very intriguing :)
Eumenidesalmost 20 years agoI liked almost all of it a great deal. Simple and strong. But could you describe amazing a bit? The use of such a broadly defined descriptor just did nothing for me in the context of this poem.
perksalmost 20 years agolook ma, he's back to writing about writing. *grin*
and this time, I like it. Nice use of metaphor, felt cohesive for me. It's simple and solid, I think.
