pond nymphs

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bluerains
bluerains
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palms of love
lather bare
bathing bodies
foamy bubbles
fondle slippery
wet skin
moon mates
dancing upon
puddles and ponds
chasing moonbeams
twist twilight's
balmy bliss
into waterspouts
outpouring their
fluids of existence
throughout
fountains
of forever
gifts of
perpetual
moon tides

bluerains
bluerains
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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 19 years ago
Oh yes!

I love this on so many levels.

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 19 years ago
Oh yes!

I love this on so many levels.

Maria2394Maria2394about 19 years ago
!!!

bluerains, I LOVE this. what a beautiful, well expressed vision. But I think that you could lengthen some of the lines, allowing the descriptions to flow more evenly into one another, giving the poem amore serene feel to it by letting the words swim into one another instead of cutting them off so abruptly. just a suggestion, really lovely as is :)

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