portraits of forever [senryu]

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bluerains
bluerains
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love like museums
mem'ries in relics they hold
the beauty lives o

bluerains
bluerains
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YDDYDDalmost 20 years ago
Senryu Contractions?

If you feel you must hold the 5 - 7 - 5 line count,

why not change the middle line to something like:

"memories held in relics" ?

LiarLiaralmost 20 years ago
o well...

I liked it anyway :)

bluerainsbluerainsalmost 20 years agoAuthor
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beauty lives on.....sorry last word not picked up

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