Problematic Sex Fantasies, #1

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Some fantasies are neverending
(Like sex beneath aporte-cochère)
That, mesmerized, one can't help spending
One's time and money in despair
Of ever in said place embracing
A partner who'll get your heart racing
While dogging her, with verve and flair,
Safe from the rain in sheltered air.
Sometimes our needs are somewhat silly,
For even if she'd lift her dress
And bare herself for my caress,
The open air would be too chilly
For it to be exactly fun—
The cold would leave me quite undone.

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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureabout 15 years ago
I hate this form!

And I hate you for making it look so easy! This is outstanding.

Tess

PandoraGlittersPandoraGlittersabout 15 years ago
Problems

I've found with sufficient body heat that problems melt, but the quandry made a lovely poem. You make form look effortless.

bflagsstbflagsstabout 15 years ago
pushkine

knows der pushkin? Nabokovish too, even better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Nicely done!

okay, i know this.. this is a onegin, um, onegin stanza? Is that what it's called? I worked on one yesterday. It looks like you have a good start in the contest. Very well done.