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rivers of body deep
artesian heart flows in circular motion
scintillation radiates terrestrial tempest
permeating cracks of withering dust
a dry desert weeps upon petals
of its budding blossoms
earthen elements repose
in shades of blue.
Here's another oldie ~
This from just a year ago;
Especially like these lines:
"a dry desert weeps upon petals
of its budding blossoms"
describe the elements and earth in such exquisite detail, blue! Everytime you do that, I look out My window from here in My den and see the beauty surrounding Me. I realize then what I take for granted or simply overlook in day to day life. You are My poetic reminder to stop and take in a drink of that which is provided for My visual enjoyment in this world. Thank you, blue.
Vixxx
That blew me away,
wonderfully worded,
very well written, my
favourite poem today!
Thanks.
~ J