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2rivers
2rivers
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putty
long rolls of clay
worms
a cylinder
spit

let’s dance
up one wall down to the dirt
let me see your pretty legs
lift your skirt

introduce me to your mother
allow me handle your hurt
-let’s lay for a while
-let us stand on the tail end of a speeding train
-shoot guns, kiss with eyes wide

love doesn’t get any younger either
love is the variegated gem

2rivers
2rivers
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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Lets dream

and do the unthinkable, living for today...and let 2rivers take you there :rose:

beautiful.

Tangerine Sex DreamTangerine Sex Dreamover 20 years ago
what it is

I'm a huge fan of 2rivers' work, and my observation is that the first word doesnt always mean what you think it should..read it again with the idea that the rest of the words on the page *are* the putty, for your mind..imagine, let this poet take you, and this poet will take you, many beautiful places..I havent been disappointed yet...

LinbidoLinbidoover 20 years ago
Putty?

I've read this now three times. And it's a very enjoyable read. But I still can't figure out what the putty-to-clay stanza is all about. Anyone has an analysis up their sleeve?

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