- Non-Erotic Poetry
- Rain Fell In the Shopping Mall!
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Rain Fell In The Shopping Mall!;
"code red, code red,"
the robots screeching wail.
On the Meta-phone,
the bi-monicled Vivivication DemonictoR
hissed snakishly:
"It's diseased, de-generate,
unprecedented, unnatural, and maniacal:
dispense the 'naturalification'
cloud air-weapons immediately,"
before smiling for an insincere bashful second
with spookily sharp, Splenda-whitened teeth.
After various Office of Dead-Letters agents
injected and inter-mingled,
Blue blood froze:
drugs failed,
fire caught
and after negotiations
(which were said to be icy, racy
and even personal,)
air-cloud-ships
mistakenly
dropped napalm on the place,
which rocketed the karma-fields considerably
and effected all major indices chillily
- COMMENTS
twelveoonealmost 11 years agoloved it
a dystopian poem, so dysfunctional, unsure if you are pressing it a bit too much.
Rain Fell In The Shopping Mall is a wonderfull off putting image
and this takes it to the limit, mirrors the artificial
before smiling for an insincere bashful second
with spookily sharp, Splenda-whitened teeth.
but this seems to tend to word salad
which rocketed the karma-fields considerably
reason?
5ed
todski28almost 11 years agohowever the flow of the piece was so good, I finished befor I started. I enjoyed it
