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Click hereI don't want vanilla,
it's cold, lifeless, and colourless
I want, I need, a rainbow,
A relationship of all colours and complete
I seek red for pain inflicted
A spank, a cane, a whip, a crop
The sting that excites and quickens
sparking, arousing, driving your hunger
I seek orange for passion hot
wild, uncontrolled, uninhibited sex
My hand on your throat
my lips on yours, fuelling that fire below
I seek yellow for secrets shared
brought into the open for future plans
Fantasies dark and thrilling
Quietly offered to one who holds your heart
I seek green for life affirming
A yes to who you are in all things
And giving back that total love
To make your beloved whole in turn
I seek blue for holding on
Not offering just a kiss and a grope
Then seeking another dream
But staying, exploring, and living life together
I seek violet for quietness gained
Finding another soul to complete my own
Mutual hungers matched and sated
And contentment when the passion's spent
I agree with Maria's comment. Very well done. My only quibble is S6L4, "living life" seems redundant to me.
This would be one of my picks of the day. First of all, I absolutely LOVE the way you used your adjectives following the subject- that technique shows thought, preparation and a unique understanding of the way words can be used in a way other than the boring usual way.
I loved these lines-
~I seek orange for passion hot
~I seek yellow for secrets shared and
~I seek violet for quietness gained
You could have made this a trite, boring poem but you didn't and it is a great piece of work. Keep up the good work and don't let go of that muse!!!!!
~ maria