Reaching Out

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My God your heart is black.
Full of evil, decay, death.
Where was the light that guided me to you?
Who put it out?
Who killed it?

Where is the one I held, loved, and needed?
Why do my tears bring you joy?
My words were pulled and twisted.
The knife it ran so deep.

Why did you bother with me?
Why did you even make me feel you?
My breath is caught in my chest.
My tears are like acid.
They burn me.

You’re crushing me!
Get off!

Please...
Please release me.

Someone just take me; pull me away.
I’m drowning, bleeding,
and I’ve lost my way.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Love undeservedly bestowed

Why?

Because the mind is silenced by heart and eye.

Thank You. Ronnie W.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
These are not deep emotions...

they are right on the surface... we can feel the texture of them; make them our feelings.

Thanks for sharing your heart with us!

DJ

oregon_galoregon_galabout 18 years ago
been there...

to the point and direct. well said.

My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailabout 18 years ago
passion

you express passion very well in your writes, I enjoyed your poem.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 18 years ago
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Metaphorical crushing weight

Of pain upon pain added up.

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