rip it off

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todski28

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I rush in
urgent to find you
ahh I spy you down the back
I slow down now that I know where you are

I calmly walk up to you
without warning I rip off your top
so naughty
you release a hiss
so sweet
so wet
pure unadulterated joy
I tentatively taste you
licking my lips I groan in appreciation
you have the sweetest tasting wetness

nothing beats a coke.

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tazz317 almost 11 years ago

A FRACTURED FAIRY TALE

with double en-tendres galore, TK U MLJ LV N V

twelveoone almost 11 years ago

hokey

in the sense of the build up and misdirection leads to a mere fizz,

i.e. overdone

but damn

you got this misdirection crap down to a "T"

i 5ed btw

todski28 almost 11 years agoAuthor

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To all

Hokey Angeline? Did you smile or laugh? If you did then this poem has served its purpose. Not everything in life has to be so serious, forms, metre, rhyme etc are amazing things but something as simple as a grin at cheeky word play is a point that life can't always be so serious.