Rockefeller Plaza, 65th Floor

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Another step, an easy turn—
So beautifully in tune we flow.
A gentle whirl and then return.
I really like my dancing slow.

So beautifully in tune, we flow
Conjoined here quite organically.
I really like my dancing slow,
To savor how you smile at me.

Conjoined here quite organically,
I love that, dancing, I may dare
To savor how you smile at me.
Our love, though public, an affair

I love that, dancing, I may dare
(A gentle whirl and then return),
A love that's public. Our affair.
Another step, an easy turn.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
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Excellent work, real craftsmanship.

annaswirlsannaswirlsabout 15 years ago
an example

Not only of the form, but of how a title can be important in setting the tone, the scene of a poem, directing, as it may, the reader to the writer's intent. Lovely