Romeo and Juliet: Redux.

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vrosej10
vrosej10
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Under the infinite waves of curling light,
In a sea of pleasure,
Roll The Lovers of Old,
Twined and intertwined,
Caress upon caress,
A building, mounting tsunami of sensation,
Crashing and overwhelming all in its path.
No sense,
No emotion,
Just pure, spurting pleasure,
He in her arms and soft place,
She impaled and enraptured,
They clasp,
Embrace,
Only to part and begin again,
And when it is all over,
They return to their ordinary lives,
And try not to mourn the moment they were epic.

vrosej10
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CeliaisAlienaCeliaisAlienaover 13 years ago
A vision of delightful torment

I thought of Dante's Inferno and the lovers pummeled forever in the hurricane at first: sortof a "blessed are the lustful damned" revision!; the final line is an impressive twist, tho frankly I'd rather be back up caught in the tsunami! (or maybe this is an ironic 'revision' --the 'in reality you'd be let down by each other' track) Nonetheless, impressively sensuous and provocative poem!

Sapphos SisterSapphos Sisterover 14 years ago
Yes, a beautiful last line

Not sure that I understand all the references even though I know the play well enough, eg how did they return to their ordinary lives? Nevertheless I liked it v much.

bflagsstbflagsstover 14 years ago
I'm dense lately

are you talking about whales? I didn't love the first half of the poem, but adored: "And try not to mourn the moment they were epic." I'm hard to please anyway, so good work. In my head I kinda wished you'd mixed lines from your "Darker Yet" with this poem, I'm not sure why.

EroticOrogenyEroticOrogenyover 14 years ago
Wild Wave

I really like the tsunami metaphor.