salaciously, snowmelt said to ocean

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Tzara
Tzara
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salaciously,
snowmelt
said to
ocean:

i may
just be
a rivulet
now,

but when
finally i thrust
into your
welcoming bay

it’ll be
a freshwater
torrent,
baby

bet you
won’t be
so pacific
then


Tzara
Tzara
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Bill DadaBill Dadaover 14 years ago
^

Tess was right, if a poem could be a cartoon, it would look just like this one.

Maria2394Maria2394over 17 years ago
this is great

cute and coy, excellent wordplay :)

xoxox

maria

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
!

I'm reading all of yours and voting, but I had to comment on this for it made me smile! Thank you!

Boo

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
*laughing*

I like this poem - if one could create a poem-cartoon or a cartoon-poem - this is what it would look like.

Thanks for sharing it, Tzara.

Tess

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
~~

a light little verse;

no intense thought here,

or profound emotion;

but an innocent well-place chuckle.

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