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Sea Breeze

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Breeze, - I say - :
breeze, you who runs
                            climbs
                             kisses
                               sips
           the sheets of sea
           summer dresses
           endless pages

Watch, - I tell you - :
                            watch me
                              closely.

 

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5 Comments
duddle146duddle146about 17 years ago
Beautiful

Simple yet beautiful with an elegant grace.

AmyfriendAmyfriendabout 17 years ago
Ahh..

why is nature so kind with her magnificent images..

sandspikesandspikeabout 17 years ago
You got it right

This is a great visual. "endless pages" I could turn them forever.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Excellent minimalist imagery leaving the reader to picture the ripples the breeze generates across the water or the teasing caresses under a summer dress. What better time to savor this than while the temp's just below -15° C.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Like

the imagery here, esp 'sips the sheets of sea'

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