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Click herein her iris
the full moon
she illuminates my life
~~*~~
her kimono drops
to me
her secrets are naked too
~~*~~
she lies on the bed
a magnolia opens
reveals its perfumed heart
~~*~~
she groans
dawn breaks over the water
everywhere glistens
~~*~~
fingering her gently
roots grow into rock crevices
seeking moisture
~~*~~
wrapped in her arms
produced by the cocoon
a butterfly
~~*~~
one last goodbye
sweeping the flower petals from my street
a chill wind
Good idea but I think some might have been stronger if
made even shorter. For example the single word cocooned could replace a line and there are a few words which may not be entirely necessary. Alternatively I could be wrong
Seems to be a nice progression from first to last, as well