- Erotic Poetry
- shamed
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although
your markings
have faded
i still feel
the burning
of thee
blows
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 18 years agocan be a wonderful thing in poetry as you've proved here. Simple but well written poem. Great stuff
jthserraover 18 years agothis poem is mentioned in the New Poem Review Thread:
http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=15098747&posted=1#post15098747
jim : )
jthserraover 18 years agohere you present the bare essentials, making a powerful statement in just a few words. You'll want to fix the typo on "the" in the second to last line. All in all, a short, powerful poem.
jim : )
