Sharing my heart break on a lonely

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I dreamed of love, and there was you
To show me things I thought I knew
I realized too late, it seems
The things you showed me weren't so true.

I let you draw me in so fast
So certain you would be my last
Your warm embrace felt good and safe
And eased me from my cold dark past.

When I was sure you were the one
To be my moon, my stars, my sun
I closed my eyes then you were gone
And that was it, our time was done.

I cried some tears then walked away
It hurts but I will be okay
Tomorrow is another day
Tomorow is another day.

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tazz317tazz317almost 8 years ago
APPRECIATE THE KNOWLEDGE

distrust the lore of acquisition. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

Could used some emotion... but other than that good poem

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
AND THE SUN SHALL RISE IN THE WEST

for all to see. TK U MLJ LV NV

KobaKobaabout 12 years ago

Is there a word missing in the title? Maybe not.

A very well written poem! Very good flow with rhymes that fall into place very nicely. Undoubtedly a piece that was cathartic to write. Isn't great to let out the feelings in a poem?